Friday, November 19, 2010

Watershed Project Near-Final Draft

Here we go:

There are still things I'm not completely satisfied with, but I feel like it's near completion.

Tuesday, November 9, 2010

Watershed Project Draft


Here is our draft. We added voiceovers to the first half of the project, but decided we wanted feedback before we continued. We're planning on adding voiceovers to the wastewater tour, the river tour, and the concluding section about the website.


Concerns we have:
  • Is the introductory sequence too jarring? Does it need a voiceover or other tweaking?
  • Do we spend enough time on the Exhibit Hall section?
  • Do we spend too much time on the others?
  • Is the tone too professional and dry?
  • Is it ok that we mention the model checkout in conjunction with the library?